"shadows are dark"
been blinded by light or lost being dark,,,
grief's surrender welcomed is part,,,
flowing passion students become smart,,,
light into dark is contrasting art,,,
feeling loving from tearing the heart,,,
grateful to shadows balancing a start,,,
nurturing grey after only light or dark...
torn with love;;;freewil
ps;;; wish to share some contrast...
been blinded by light or lost being dark,,,
grief's surrender welcomed is part,,,
flowing passion students become smart,,,
light into dark is contrasting art,,,
feeling loving from tearing the heart,,,
grateful to shadows balancing a start,,,
nurturing grey after only light or dark...
torn with love;;;freewil
ps;;; wish to share some contrast...
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Re: contrasting art;;; first line rewrite and backwards fun
Tue, March 28, 2006 - 9:58 AMbackwards lol=love of lessons... simply a vulurable heart...
"shadows are dark"
dark lost or light blinded,,,
been blinded by light or lost being dark,,,
part is welcoming surrendering grief,,,
grief's surrender welcomed is part,,,
smart become students passion flowing,,,
flowing passion students become smart,,,
art contrasting is dark into light,,,
light into dark is contrasting art,,,
hearts a tearing from loving feelings,,,,
feeling loving from tearing the heart,,,
start balancing shadows so gratefully,,,
grateful to shadows balancing a start,,,
dark or light only after grey nurturing,,,
nurturing grey after only light or dark...
humbly;;;freewil
ps;;;found fresh lessons in simplicity and harmony going backwards... lol=love of lessons...
please feel free to play with this poem or another..